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Winslow House

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Sigh~ le pencil stuff that I don't normally put up here but oh well... I did this for one of my assignments and even though it obviously looks half-assed I got a pretty good score (no I am not smug :D ) done with rotring tikky 0.7 and cretacolor monolith graphite 6B
Image size
1000x605px 374.38 KB
Make
Motorola
Model
XT1033
Shutter Speed
1/17 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
500
Date Taken
Sep 6, 2014, 5:21:01 PM
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Hey there!

This is a nice and peaceful scene. I love the composition. There are three things I could suggest for the improvement:
Top front line of the roof looks bouncy. It would fix the perspective if looked more straight.
To increase the strength of the depth feeling you can play with shadows and light on overall picture; choosing the light source,
and deepen the shadows.
Scanning the drawing would make the quality of the deviation jump! Or taking the photo of it directly from front of it so the black
empty part at the right bottom of the deviation wouldn't be seen.

In general, I love how you put together all the elements of an everyday view. :heart:
Keep up the good work. :)

ps: Commented on behalf of ProjectComment