Rei (OC) WIP - Updated

Rei (OC belongs to me)

Information -   OC REQUESTAlright so I know I've been drawing people's OCs and all that but guess what, I CANNOT DRAW MY OWN. Because I somehow cannot get it right?
So, I would be really really REALLY grateful if someone could draw me mine. However, I cannot really pay for it since I have close to no points and I am kinda saving up for a premium account. I can offer you a llama and a free request slot.
Details:
Name: Rei 
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Species: Hanyou/Half deamon
Height: 5'3''
Skin tone: Wheatish
Hair Colour: Black
Eyes: Cat eyes
Other features: A diamond shaped pattern in the center of her forehead, black edges and slate-grey center
Clothes:  She wears a hadajuban and a blue furisode kimono on top of that like a jacket (open in the front) tied together with a very clumsily tied obi (violet and deep blue in colour). She wears pair of black three quarter pants underneath, and red converse shoes over tabis. 
Hi

Huff, so I tried to draw her and it turned out fine so far. The furisode is a pain in the ass to draw though, and I'm positively gunna cry when I get to colouring and detailing it but weeellll.. 

Update- So yeah~ I did research around a bit and found out that furisodes were infact worn my kids during inuyasha's time so I altered around a bit, and hence VERSION 2

The hadajuban that she's wearing has been bunched up and tied with a sash (in a similar manner as Sesshomaru's) which is why its bulging. The kosode (if that's what its called I dont know anymore) is just there like a jacket, and yes she is wearing tabi under those hideously drawn shoes